Editing
As an editing addict, I love reworking text to make it more engaging. Think of it like rearranging furniture in a new home: you’re figuring out what fits best and where, with some setups being more welcoming than others. Similarly, editing means rearranging words and sentences to develop a natural, pleasing flow. And when done right, it’s quite a creative process.
Editing An Architect's Statement of Purpose
![Before/After: My edits for an architect's statement of purpose essay.](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Architect-edit-1-768x550.png)
![My edits of an architect's statement of purpose (Part 2)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Architect-edit-2-768x475.png)
![My edits of an architect's statement of purpose (Part 2)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Architect-edit-3-768x474.png)
Reworking A Government Email
![My edits for a government email (Part 1)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Government-edit-1-768x552.png)
![My edits for a government email (Part 2)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Government-edit-2-768x455.png)
![My edits for a government email (Part 3)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Government-edit-3-768x455.png)
![My edits for a government email (Part 4)](https://www.rohantharyan.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/10/Government-edit-4-768x455.png)